My colleague, Kelsey, then sub edited my script:
I then made those changes and this was my final script:
I then sub-edited my colleague, Daniel Hopkins' work this was his original first draft script:
Here is my sub edit of his script:
PR8-B - Editing and Processing Text to Meet a Brief
First Draft of Script:
My colleague, Kelsey, then sub edited my script:
I then made those changes and this was my final script:
I then sub-edited my colleague, Daniel Hopkins' work this was his original first draft script:
Here is my sub edit of his script:
My colleague, Kelsey, then sub edited my script:
I then made those changes and this was my final script:
I then sub-edited my colleague, Daniel Hopkins' work this was his original first draft script:
Here is my sub edit of his script: